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and my voice is choked with pebbles
and my veins are thick with ink
so i'll bleed out all my lovesongs
wash them down the kitchen sink
and i'll tell you that i'm leaving
and i'll flee this soulless town
for the silent sea is calling
and i'm not afraid to drown
and i'll search out quiet islands
let the blank horizons be
drench my soul in every ocean
sink my heart in every sea.
--sweat, tears, or the sea.

This particular rhythm is constantly in my head, and I usually have to purposefully break it because it's so hard to keep up for any length of time without losing meaning. Decided to run with it this time, though. ^^
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sounds like a song. Love it. Simple, refreshing, soft, powerful - like waves lapping shores.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
Thank you, dear! :heart: I really like this one... :)
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course! :heart:
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spearofhope Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mmmmnn... Now I'm just so glad I clocked on this.

Do you want to know what this seems like to me? It seems like the Lyrics to a Tom Waits song.

And a damn good one at that.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
:blushes: Thanks so much! :D
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Professional Writer
your beautiful art is in the empty north [link] - conclusion :rose:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
:heart:
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MrsKyoya Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this one as well~ so flowing, like a song :3 i read it, then read it out loud, then read it to my sister, then read it to my brother, they both loved it as well XD
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Oh, thanks so much! :heart:
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MrsKyoya Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are most welcome XD <3 :3
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