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Listen to the audio version for the full effect, pretty please.

cloudshot sky like an oil painting and i am watching the
seagulls. i--
darling, i will swim for you
and swallow every whitecap.
i will pluck myself a coat of pelican wings,
sew them up with salt and spray--
become icarus for you.

you are calling me across the waves, love--
but you pull against the ache
in my bones, the hollow--
the clawing out for unseen sunsets and unturned tides.

i hear you, love
give me time.

i will always listen.
The minimalist redux of Syracuse. I think I like this one better.

Opinions would be lovely. :heart:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Professional Writer
nice reading once again :rose:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Thank you! :heart:
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tisserande-d-encre Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Writer
Who needs drugs and cannabis when you can fly just by listening and/or reading to this??
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:icondisrhythmic:
disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Hahaha, this is your brain--this is your brain on Dizzy. <3
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Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"cloudshot sky like an oil painting and i am watching the
seagulls."


Lovely. Haunting. B-)
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:icondisrhythmic:
disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
Thanks so much! :heart:
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Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :)
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
just stalking your comments on the Literature Experiment a wee bit

"become icarus for you." beautiful as ever :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Thank you, sweetheart. :huggle:
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
Terrific work, both the audio and the visual. :heart:
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