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the waves are calling.

watch--stormbound, the breakers
arch up to clutch at the unyielding stones
with a roar and a hiss and a sigh;
gather themselves back and
reach--and wait
and wait.
the sea is patient, and your limestone fear 
will erode. 

you will be
hollow.
a vessel.

you will be beautiful.

the waves are calling.
listen.
Written to The Sea is Calling, by Temper Trap.

For
Because of
Thanks to

Damn you, ~Is-lnds. :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. I love the line "you will be beautiful" and the personal touch it creates in the poem. Lovely work. :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Thanks love. :heart:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Wow. This is gorgeous.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Thank you. :heart:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome :D
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
well - thats one way
of looking at hollow.
is hollow beautiful .. ?

damn you, *disrhythmic. :lol:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Hollow things can be filled up. Hollow things are endless possibility.

:heart:
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
I would favorite this comment.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
:huggle:
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