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Churchbells ring twice and everywhere--
in the echoes there are whispers,
sliding quiet along the edges of
logical fallacies. This
is how the world will end:
lovers and lies,
and a sudden
long
night.
Commission for ~TaraSwanwing, who asked for whatever I wanted. Naturally, this was the hardest one to fill. :XD:

Hope you like it, dear. :heart:

Hey, you. Commission me here (for free!)
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0hgravity Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it does have a very t.s. eliot feel to it--lonely and cryptic. I really like how the sound of it slowly quieted like the echo of a bell. 

I'd maybe come back to this and make it a tad longer but as is, it was an interesting read and well worth multiple reads.
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:icondisrhythmic:
:salute: Thank you so much. :heart:
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FuzzyHoser Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm offended by your fantastic writing. :B

Haha...seriously, I really like this.
Very clever.
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:icondisrhythmic:
Oh gosh, thank you so much. :blush:
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FuzzyHoser Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A pleasure, m'dear. (:
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Laitma Aug 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Oooooooooohhhhhh the way this piece spirals to the conclusion is just terrific~ *-*
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:icondisrhythmic:
Thank you so much! :heart:
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chromeantennae Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So amazing. :love:
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chromeantennae Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. :heart:
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