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trust me enough
to let me carve my love into the
quiet slope of your back.
let me feel each bone,
feel your spinal cord humming
beneath my fingertips.

let me feel
unsettled.
I kind of really like this one.
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haphazardmelody Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The ending completely makes this into something amazing.
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:icondisrhythmic:
Oh gosh. :heart: Thank you so much!
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RiseandBe Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:stare:

let me feel
unsettled



...

:heart:
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RiseandBe Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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Sammur-amat Jul 20, 2013   General Artist
i kind of really love this one, too :love:
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Gadgetsmith Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
When I carve anything into anyone, I don't do so figuratively.

This is great, though.
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Gadgetsmith Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Whenever somebody mentions cutting themselves around Me, I offer to do it for them, and, as a bonus, *I make sure it's pretty*  Everybody wins!
Basically en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ta_moko except not.

And you're welcome.
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