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trust me enough
to let me carve my love into the
quiet slope of your back.
let me feel each bone,
feel your spinal cord humming
beneath my fingertips.

let me feel
unsettled.
I kind of really like this one.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The ending completely makes this into something amazing.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
Oh gosh. :heart: Thank you so much!
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:stare:

let me feel
unsettled



...

:heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
Oh gosh. :heart:
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013   General Artist
i kind of really love this one, too :love:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
:heart:!
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Gadgetsmith Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
When I carve anything into anyone, I don't do so figuratively.

This is great, though.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
:eyes:

Thanks. ^^
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Gadgetsmith Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Whenever somebody mentions cutting themselves around Me, I offer to do it for them, and, as a bonus, *I make sure it's pretty*  Everybody wins!
Basically en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ta_moko except not.

And you're welcome.
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Jewel16000 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow...amazing
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
:heart:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student Writer
eeeeeeeep!
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
:la:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student Writer
:iconbeatingheartplz:
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Laitma Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student General Artist
:heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
:huggle:
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Eremitik Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
The essence of all deep relationships is trust, isnt it?

what I like about this is the simplicity of it, the subtle sensuous thrill of how close physical contact can make us feel unsettled and unsure
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Thanks so much. :heart:
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
you're good at this minimal thing.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
aw shucks. :heart:

(this is my 10,000th comment.)
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
for me?

aw shucks. :heart:
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thatlibraryguy Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
That's so... apropos!
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
:D
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