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the writer, in bed,
ponders the hushing fricatives
of denim on cotton,
the liquid linguistics
of hips and ribs and delicate
vertebra; and catalogues--files away
for later--
every shaking aspirant and every
quiet, arched-throat glottal stop,
and the way it all just
rolls
so perfectly
off the tongue.
Ahaha. What am I doing.

Posting before I lose my nerve.
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:iconflummo:
flummo Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Student Writer
Ditto ~ColoringTheRain. :heart: This flows wonderfully.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
:huggle:
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are describing it perfectly, that's what you're doing.

I love your words.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Thank you so much, love. :heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner May 4, 2013   General Artist
i love the organic yet lyrical feel to it. brilliant job, dizzy doll. :cuddle: :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Thank you, lovely! :heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner May 6, 2013   General Artist
sure thing, sugar! :blowkiss:
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
yeah .. :flame:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
:dummy:
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my goodness. Whew. Perfectly done, gal! This is sultry as can be but still tasteful, juuuuuust enough detail. (: I'm surprised you've not had a bunch of requests for a reading. Haha..
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Thankya, darlin'! :heart:

-preens self- Pssh, they know they couldn't handle the sexy, that's all. :lmao:
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sure you could get through it in one reading without blushing, too. ;P

Mighty welcome, love! :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
Oh, totally. :lmao:
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vespera Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oooooh sexy time ;)

I'm glad you posted this up :D
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
:blush:

Thanks. :heart:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Seriously fabulous.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
:heart:
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TheAntiAnti-Drug Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, this is so precise. 0;
Nice work.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
Thanks! :heart:
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TheBrokenBride Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
Please don't lose your nerve if you've got more like this. It's brainy and guttural at the same time, and therefore fantastic.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
:heart: Thank you!
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like this because fricatives :lol:
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TheBrokenBride Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
Well, I like it because glottal stops.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
Linguistics! :dummy:
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ColoringTheRain Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This rolls perfectly off the tongue
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
:heart:
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1nkl1ng Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
^Agreed! Beautiful.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
:heart:
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Laitma Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I agree with 0hgravity, this is gorgeous. :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
Thank you! :heart:
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
and all the linguists swoon.

don't know what there is to be nervous about, this is quite beautifully done.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
:heart:

I don't normally write stuff like this, is all. :)
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