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the writer, in bed,
ponders the hushing fricatives
of denim on cotton,
the liquid linguistics
of hips and ribs and delicate
vertebra; and catalogues--files away
for later--
every shaking aspirant and every
quiet, arched-throat glottal stop,
and the way it all just
rolls
so perfectly
off the tongue.
Ahaha. What am I doing.

Posting before I lose my nerve.
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flummo Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Student Writer
Ditto ~ColoringTheRain. :heart: This flows wonderfully.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
:huggle:
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are describing it perfectly, that's what you're doing.

I love your words.
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:icondisrhythmic:
disrhythmic Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Thank you so much, love. :heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner May 4, 2013   General Artist
i love the organic yet lyrical feel to it. brilliant job, dizzy doll. :cuddle: :heart:
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:icondisrhythmic:
disrhythmic Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Thank you, lovely! :heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner May 6, 2013   General Artist
sure thing, sugar! :blowkiss:
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
yeah .. :flame:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
:dummy:
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my goodness. Whew. Perfectly done, gal! This is sultry as can be but still tasteful, juuuuuust enough detail. (: I'm surprised you've not had a bunch of requests for a reading. Haha..
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