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i read some poetry
just for the sound--for the words lilting up and down
and the thick, honeysepia
polaroids unmisting in my head.
those are the poems i never understand
and the only conclusion i can draw is:
there is apparently
some supernova poetic awakening that comes
with the loss of virginity
and basically i need to get laid.
Observations.
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I snorted when I read that ending.
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:icondisrhythmic:
disrhythmic Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
:bow:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013   General Artist
brilliant piece, darling! :giggle:
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:icondisrhythmic:
disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Thank you so much, dear!
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013   General Artist
always a pleasure, dizzy darling :tighthug:
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:icongadgetsmith:
Gadgetsmith Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Oh, you humans & you're peculiar need to breed... I don't Understand you...
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Me either. -sigh-
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:icongadgetsmith:
Gadgetsmith Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I am *S*O* disappointed in My grammar right now... I bitch every time I see somebody use the wrong "your," yet I just freaking did it...

Even though I wasn't drinking, I blame alcohol.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
-pets you- It's okay, I won't tell... :shifty:
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Gadgetsmith Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
You're petting Me now?  ... was licking Me not weird enough?  It's fine, though, really; all My girlfriends treat Me like a puppy for some reason.  Friends that happen to be females, just to clarify - I may as well be a monk.
{whether you tell or not, *I'll* always Know}

I'm changing the subject - I sharpie'd the holy mother of carp out of My cellie today. and it is MUCH better now - red webs on a deep, shiny Purple background, because I'm more than awesome.  How's your day going?
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