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there are stars at the bottom
of this bottle.

in your head,
there are other bodies--

breathing.
I am at a sudden and unexpected emotional low.

I'll be okay in the morning.
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ColoringTheRain Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm a little slow on the draw, but I hope the mass of favorites you're about to get brightens the emotions a little :)
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
Thank you so much, dear! :D
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Laitma Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Ahhhh, I hope you're feeling better now-!  
This is a lovely piece though, but-!  Take care-!  o:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
I am, thank you. :heart:
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muscularteeth Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
hmmm, i think the two images need more of a connection, but there's something really beautiful about this. the last three lines are especially striking.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Thank you. :heart:
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014   Writer
I'm rather fond of those last two lines. :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Me too. :heart: Thanks so much.
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014   Writer
My pleasure.
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh man. I feel ya on this one. :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
:heart:
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Nichrysalis Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sparse poetica. :heart:
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
:huggle:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Completely agree with KimchiMuse.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Thank you. :heart:
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KimchiMuse Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good, I love the minimalism portrayed here.  A lot of people don't do minimalism in the right way, you've succeeded where they all fail.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Thank you so much. :heart:
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